RedYankee:

Usually I just roll my eyes when I see a thread with "read this" or "must read" in the title, but this one definatley made me smile.  Nice job mate. A few minor flaws (already mentioned by others), but nothing that can't be fixed.

woh! the real red yankee,all these slim shady's yank ehh! please stand up...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PPGMk2IKG7U it's to that if you guys didnt pick up on it :P

Vardrocks:

if ur a Man Utd fan plzz read this!!!!!!! CHELSEA THE CHEATERS ARSENAL THE SUCKER LIVERPOOL THE BEGGAR MANCHESTER UNITED THE WINNERS ! Man Utd are Magic...! Liverpool are Tragic...! Chelsea are not ok...! Arsenal are very gay...! Chelsea are scum...! Arsenal taste like bum...! Liverpool are alrite...! Man Utd ignite...! a little bit of Owen in our lives a little bit of GIGGSY down the sides a little bit of CARRICK is what we need a little bit of NANI with his speed a little bit of FERDINAND in defense a little bit of ROONEY he's immense a little bit of opposition hope they die a little bit of FERGIE so cool don't lie Old Trafford (given the nickname "The Theater of Dreams" by Sir Bobby Charlton) Well i am a true... RED DEVIL R U Too???

Nice poem.

put some music to it, it would be good to sing it at O T

Not a sure about Liverpool are al right bit but the rest is pretty good.

WOW that is some necro thread bump

thanks a lot mate.

 OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They sensored the word 'Mamb.o'. How crazy is that?!

Usually I just roll my eyes when I see a thread with "read this" or "must read" in the title, but this one definatley made me smile.  Nice job mate. A few minor flaws (already mentioned by others), but nothing that can't be fixed.

not bad mate it's all good appart fom liverool are alright we all know they're scum really

good post though

MauritianDevil:

U r a joke mate ...  Liverpool are alrite ....surely not  Got lost in your last two sentences...

 

What about these??

"Liverpool can't fight.. Man Utd ignite..."

 

Nice poem (looks like a poem to me), btw.

 

Yeah.. you should wirte in paragraphs.. it was a bit confusing.. Nice though

 

 Yeah I'm a Red Devil too how long it take you to come up with that?

Vardrocks:

if ur a Man Utd fan plzz read this!!!!!!! CHELSEA THE CHEATERS ARSENAL THE SUCKER LIVERPOOL THE BEGGAR MANCHESTER UNITED THE WINNERS ! Man Utd are Magic...! Liverpool are Tragic...! Chelsea are not ok...! Arsenal are very gay...! Chelsea are scum...! Arsenal taste like bum...! Liverpool are alrite...! Man Utd ignite...! a little bit of Owen in our lives a little bit of GIGGSY down the sides a little bit of CARRICK is what we need a little bit of NANI with his speed a little bit of FERDINAND in defense a little bit of ROONEY he's immense a little bit of opposition hope they die a little bit of FERGIE so cool don't lie Old Trafford (given the nickname "The Theater of Dreams" by Sir Bobby Charlton) Well i am a true... RED DEVIL R U Too???

 

 

U r a joke mate ...  Liverpool are alrite ....surely not  Got lost in your last two sentences...

That's a good post........It rhymes too......But you might want to use paragraphs, as it will be easier to read.......I nearly got lost in the 2nd last sentence.....But overall a good work.....

if ur a Man Utd fan plzz read this!!!!!!! CHELSEA THE CHEATERS ARSENAL THE SUCKER LIVERPOOL THE BEGGAR MANCHESTER UNITED THE WINNERS ! Man Utd are Magic...! Liverpool are Tragic...! Chelsea are not ok...! Arsenal are very gay...! Chelsea are scum...! Arsenal taste like bum...! Liverpool are alrite...! Man Utd ignite...! a little bit of Owen in our lives a little bit of GIGGSY down the sides a little bit of CARRICK is what we need a little bit of NANI with his speed a little bit of FERDINAND in defense a little bit of ROONEY he's immense a little bit of opposition hope they die a little bit of FERGIE so cool don't lie Old Trafford (given the nickname "The Theater of Dreams" by Sir Bobby Charlton) Well i am a true... RED DEVIL R U Too???